Hi class.
Today I’m going to talk about my holidays. I have long been thinking to do on
my winter vacation. I love the south of Chile, but I don't know the north. My
friends tell me about the north, they tell me that is beauty, which is amazing
at night. Look at the stars at night is simply wonderful.
My sister
also tell me about the north, San Pedro de Atacama, for example. She tell me
that San Pedro is surround. Also which landscapes are cute in their own way. She said that the north is very different to
the south. Which each has his own. I think that I go to the north of Chile this
winter vacation.
One factor
is the rain. In winter in the south rain too much, then I prefer north fot this
vacation. I like San Pedro de Atacama, so says my sister. I don’t know who I
want to travel, but if I have to travel alone, I do.
I hope to
know the north at its best that I would love knows the north and surround for
his beautiful.
Chile is beautiful
Hi love
ReplyDeleteI don´t know the north
but it must be beautiful, especially for the weather
I hope you can go to the north really soon
Kisses
You are right Seba, Chile is beautiful!
ReplyDeleteYour sentence formulation and vocabulary are improving, but there is still work to do.
For example,
" they tell me that IT is beautIFUL, AND amazing at night. LookING at the stars at night is simply wonderful"
Beauty is a noun, you need an adjective BEAUTIFUL.
And a verb in ING at the begining of a sentence works as an infinitive in Spanish: Looking at the stars...Mirar las estrellas...
Don´t forget the third person singular, pte. "My sister also tells me" .
What do you mean by: "San Pedro is surround"?
Future: "I think that I WILL GO to the north"
Missing subject: In winter in the south IT rainS too much.
Finally, your task is not complete. You don´t mention what your dream vacation is.
TASK 2
LEXIS 2
GRAM 1.5= 5.5 POINTS = 4.5